You seriously need an editor. Are you taking other articles and just kind of sloppily going through and barely rewording or rearranging words and phrases so you're not outright plagiarizing? It's obvious you're not proofreading and proofreading again.
You seriously need an editor. Are you taking other articles and just kind of sloppily going through and barely rewording or rearranging words and phrases so you're not outright plagiarizing? It's obvious you're not proofreading and proofreading again.
Very difficult to follow this article - no flow whatsoever.